The pre-publication reviews
for DEAD MAN WALKING have been pretty good so far, I’m happy to report, but the
real business starts on Thursday this week, November 20, when the book is
officially published. That’s when I suppose I should be getting nervous. It’s
always an exciting time, but you’re on edge too – the general public thus far
seem happy with my DS Heckenburg novels, so it’s fingers crossed that they’ll
continue to be.
For anyone who hasn’t read
any of the Heck books yet, and maybe needs a little encouragement, DEAD MAN WALKING wouldn’t be too bad a place to start. The Heck novels concern the investigations of a young but obsessive detective attached to an elite Scotland
Yard unit dedicated to catching repeat killers, but though the books run as a series
they exist in isolation from each other too. In other words, you won’t need to
have read the first three to enjoy this one, which is the fourth.
Anyway, in case you still
need some convincing, here, somewhat exclusively, is a chapter lifted freely
from DEAD MAN WALKING, and reprinted for your personal delectation (the action takes place in the isolated Lake District village of Cragwood Keld, shortly after local police officers, Heck included, have aired a suspicion that a brutal killer may be on the loose):
CHAPTER 11
Rather to Hazel’s surprise, the pub drew custom
that evening. She’d intended to keep the front door locked, but had told all
the locals she’d still be open for business – they needed only to knock.
The first knock came
shortly after six; Burt and Mandy Fillingham. This was perhaps expected.
Fillingham, as a gossip merchant, would hear a lot less sitting behind locked
doors at home than he would in The Witch’s Kettle. Half an hour later, Ted
Haveloc showed up. In this case, it was more of a surprise. For a grizzled
sixty-two-year-old, Haveloc was the most robust occupant of the Keld, a
long-term outdoorsman with the gnarled hands and cracked black fingernails to
prove it. But he lived alone of course, so perhaps even he felt more vulnerable
than usual on a night like this. The O’Grady sisters, Dulcie and Sally, lived
together, socialised together, did almost everything together, and yet they
turned up a short time later too, having made the short trip across the green
at a scurry and knocking frantically and continually on the pub’s heavy oaken
door until Lucy opened it. Half an hour after that, Bella McCarthy and her
husband did exactly the same thing. In their ones and twos, the customers
settled around the fire, drank alcohol and conversed in quiet, subdued tones.
‘Strength in numbers, I
suppose,’ Lucy said, as she and her aunt stood behind the bar.
‘Yep,’ Hazel replied. ‘Do
me a favour, Luce. Go upstairs, check all the windows are locked … yeah?’
Lucy nodded and trotted
away. Hazel glanced at her watch. It was just after six-thirty.
‘Is there anything to eat,
Hazel?’ Ted Haveloc called across the taproom. ‘I haven’t had a meal all day,
and I’m famished.’
‘Erm, yeah … sure,’ she said,
unable to think of any reason why the normal menu wouldn’t be operating. They
had plenty of food in the larder, and neither she nor Lucy would have much else
to do for the rest of the evening. ‘Give us a minute, okay?’
She breezed through into
the kitchen, turned the ovens on and, as an afterthought, opened the top panel
in the window over the sink. It was a relatively small kitchen and would
quickly get hot and stuffy when they started cooking.
Then Hazel heard the
ululation – the distant, eerie ululation.
Astonished, she turned to
the window.
Several seconds passed as
she wondered if she’d imagined it. Because it had sounded like no human cry
she’d ever heard, and yet some disconcerting inner sense told her that was
exactly what it was.
Beyond the window lay the
yard where her maroon Renault Laguna was parked, and various crates and barrels
awaited collection by the drayman. Even with the gates barred, as they were
now, someone could get in there easily enough – the walls were only seven feet
high. But briefly, that didn’t matter.
Hazel knew what she’d
heard.
She opened the back door
and stood on the step, listening. The air was bitter, the fog thick, grimy and
fluffy as cotton wool. Was it possible there was some kind of error here? Had
someone been fiddling around with the jukebox in the taproom? But now she heard
the cry again – this time prolonged for several seconds longer than before.
Weird, ululating, so filled with angst and torment that it barely sounded
human. Abruptly, it snapped off.
Hazel stood rooted to the
spot, deep shivers passing down her spine.
When she finally went back
inside, she ensured to lock the door behind her. Almost certainly the rare
atmospheric conditions were partly responsible for her hearing that sound. She
had no doubt it had travelled a long distance. The normal acoustics in the
Cradle would also have assisted. Whenever the drag-hunt was around, she’d hear
the yipping of the hounds and the drone of the hunting horn when the pack was
way up at the north end of the valley.
Two words formed in her
mind – for about the twentieth time that day.
Annie Beckwith.
Hazel seriously doubted
that even on a night like this, noises at Fellstead Grange would be audible in
Cragwood Keld. But that poor old dear was such a long way from help should she
need it, and of course she had no idea she was in danger. Lucy reappeared in
the kitchen doorway, so abruptly that Hazel jumped.
‘Ted Haveloc’s still asking
if there’s any food on tonight?’
‘Erm, yeah, yeah … sure.
Give them the menus. Listen, Lucy …?’
Lucy glanced back in.
‘You’ll have to cook it
yourself. That okay?’
Lucky looked briefly
puzzled, but then shrugged. ‘No problem.’
While Lucy went back out
into the taproom, Hazel crossed the kitchen and retrieved one of the police
contact cards. The first number she tried was Heck’s mobile. Predictably, there
was no response. Following that, she tried Mary-Ellen. That gained no reply
either. She went out into the bar and tried the police station from the
landline, but it was the same outcome.
‘Anyone up at Cragwood Keld
police office, Ted?’ she asked Ted Haveloc. As he lived closest to the police
station, he was the most likely to know.
‘The lights were on when I
came out, Hazel, but I didn’t see anyone moving around,’ he replied. ‘The Land
Rover’s not there, nor Sergeant Heckenburg’s Citroen. At a guess, the place is
still locked up and they’re out and about.’
‘Thanks.’
Cumbria prided itself on
the sense of community preserved in its small, close-knit towns and villages.
Hazel supposed this had developed naturally in an environment where all
occupants were lumped together. Encircled by bleak moors, fathomless forests,
and high, wind-riven mountains, there was a sense of embattlement, and of
course they had terrible winters here – the worst rain, the worst snow, and now
it seemed, the worst fog. Lake District residents needed to get on well
together and look out for each other, just to endure.
As such, Hazel wondered
when it was that she’d last seen Annie.
A couple of years ago,
easily. The old dear had reluctantly come down to the pub to celebrate Ted
Haveloc’s sixtieth, and even then she’d been all skin and bone, wearing ragged
clothes. Ted, who knew Annie better than anyone because he occasionally went up
to help with chores on her run-down farm, might have seen her more recently,
but not, as far as Hazel was aware, in the last few months. The water company
truck went up there reasonably regularly too, to empty the septic tank, but
would its crew have any interaction with the old girl? Would they even know she
was there while they were working?
None of this was good
enough, Hazel decided. Mark had said they’d get up there at some point, but he
hadn’t held out much hope it would be anytime soon, and it probably wouldn’t be
because he and Mary-Ellen would have a lot to do. But in the meantime someone
had to look out for that nice old lady.
Hazel slipped out around
the bar to the foot of the stairs. Nobody noticed; they were all too busy
giving Lucy their food orders. Upstairs in the flat, she put on her walking
boots and her fleece-lined jacket. She decided that she’d try to persuade Annie
to come back down here, offer to put her up for a few nights free of charge. If
nothing else, the old lady could have a hot bath, get a proper night’s sleep,
and sit out the crisis in relative safety. Failing that – because Hazel knew
Annie, and she could be stubborn as an ox – she’d take her some supplies up;
some eggs, milk, bread, some packets of tea and dried soup, some chocolate and
biscuits. She didn’t know what Annie lived on half the time. She’d once kept
cows and pigs. She’d even had a pony for her trap, though said trap was now
most likely decaying in some forgotten outbuilding. Ultimately, Annie had
become too infirm to tend her stock, though she’d often tell anyone who’d
listen that they were her only real friends. Apparently, she still grew her own
fruit and vegetables, but in all honesty how easy could it be to eke out your
existence like that, especially when you were an OAP?
Feeling guilty at not having
done this before, Hazel quickly went back downstairs and straight into the
kitchen before anyone could query her. She got everything together, placed it
in a wicker basket and covered it with a fresh tablecloth. She also grabbed
herself an electric torch.
Then she had another
thought.
Perhaps it was a bit silly
– maybe an overreaction, maybe a massive
overreaction, but Mark had seemed genuinely concerned earlier on. She knew a
little bit about his background. He’d been in a few scrapes, to say the least.
Surely it would take a lot to discomfort him as much as he’d looked
discomforted today? In which case, assuming this menace wasn’t imaginary, she
left the basket on one of the kitchen work-tops and trotted back upstairs. As
she did, she felt a different kind of guilt – about breaking her word. Before
he’d set off on his travels, Mark had strongly advised her to stay in the pub
and provide a safe haven for the occupants of Cragwood Keld. Definitely not to
go to the far end of the Cradle and up the Track to Annie’s farm. But Mark had
only been here two and a half months. He was a good man, but a child of the
urban sprawl. He likely had no idea how much they all cared for each other in
these rural outlands. Hazel made a mental commitment to teach him that – if he
opted to stay with her and give it a go.
And she wasn’t ignoring his
concerns either. That was why she was now back up here in the flat, why she was
rummaging through the closet among her ex’s old sports gear and fishing tackle.
The item she was looking for was right at the back, in a zipped canvas case.
She lifted it out. It was old now, not quite an antique, but it had belonged to
her father and to her grandfather before him. Slowly and cautiously, she drew
the zipper down and extricated the object inside.
It was a double-barrel
Purdey shotgun, a twelve-gauge. With its walnut stock, open scroll coin
engravings on its sidelock, and blued carbon steel barrels, it was an exquisite
piece of craftsmanship, and had been her father’s pride and joy when he’d used
to go duck hunting. Even now it was in excellent working condition. Over the
years, she’d disassembled and reassembled it several times, oiling it
regularly. Both Mark and Mary-Ellen knew she had it in her possession, but
while the two cops didn’t exactly approve, they weren’t about to turn her in.
Mark would probably do his nut if he knew she kept it in an old cupboard in her
lounge, but the truth was she didn’t really have anywhere else.
The one big problem of
course, was the absence of ammunition. There was a cartridge box in the closet,
on a high shelf. Mark had told her she was supposed to keep the ammunition away
from the firearm – but as the box only contained two cartridges it hardly
seemed worth the trouble. There’d only been two as long as Hazel could
remember. She broke the breech open just to check, then snapped it closed
again, slid it back into its case, and shoved the cartridge box into her fleece
pocket.
Before descending the
stairs, Hazel took off her fleece and draped it over her shoulder, to conceal
the weapon. No one in the taproom noticed, but in the kitchen Lucy was now hard
at work. She’d already spotted the basket of supplies, and when she saw the
shotgun as well her eyebrows arched dramatically.
‘Don’t tell anyone,’ Hazel
said. ‘But I’m going up to Fellstead Grange.’
‘Annie Beckwith’s place?
Why?’
Hazel didn’t mention the
cry she’d heard earlier. She was starting to think that had been nothing
significant; an animal or some rare bird. There were plenty to choose from in
the heart of the National Park. But the others wouldn’t rationalise it that
way. They’d try to stop her going.
‘I don’t like the idea of
her being alone up there.’
‘Heck said it wasn’t a good
idea,’ Lucy argued.
It’s easy for him to say
that,’ Hazel replied. ‘He doesn’t know Annie. To him, she’s just a name.’
‘He knows what he’s talking
about. Anyway, M-E said she’d go and look.’
‘Will Mary-Ellen take Annie
some spare food? Will she suggest she come down here and stay for a few nights
in the pub?’
Lucy had no answer for
that.
‘It’s not a problem,’ Hazel
added. ‘I’m driving to the Ho, and walking up the Track to Annie’s farm. I’ll
be forty minutes, tops. And if anyone tries to mess with me …’ she hefted the
shotgun, ‘I’ve got this.’
Lucy looked more than a
little sceptical. ‘Have you ever fired that thing?’
‘You point it and pull the
trigger. How hard can it be?’
‘In this fog you won’t know
who it is until they’re right on top of you.’
‘No one’s going to be on
top of me,’ Hazel said with an airy confidence she didn’t feel. She pulled a
bob-cap on, zipped her fleece and took her gear to the back door. ‘Close the
gate after I’ve gone, and make sure you put the bolt on. Then lock the back
door and look after our customers. They’re your responsibility while I’m gone.
Like I say, I’ll be forty minutes, max.’
Lucy gave her further
arguments, but knew from experience that when her Aunt Hazel’s mind was made
up, there was no changing it. Hazel had a disarmingly gentle manner, but for
several years she’d survived comfortably in an isolated environment which in
winter was as challenging as they came. Many was the time Lucy had seen her
carrying piles of firewood through the snow, chipping ice from frozen water
pipes, fixing broken roof-tiles and gutters, tasks which didn’t remotely faze
her. For all her soft exterior, Hazel was gutsy and independent, and she cared
about her neighbours; that latter aspect of her character, in particular, was
non-negotiable. So in the end Lucy did as she was asked, closing the back gate
straight away after Hazel had reversed out through it in her Laguna, and
ramming the bolt home; then going back indoors to cook everyone their tea.
Slowly and cautiously,
Hazel’s heavy car rumbled its way around the exterior of the pub, joining
Truscott Drive, the single lane that ran upward across the green and through
the centre of the village. Very little was visible, even with full headlights,
the beams draining ineffectively into impenetrable murk. In some ways it was
encouraging, she thought, as she finally reached the top of the Drive and swung
left onto Cragwood Road. Because whoever she couldn’t see out there, they
presumably couldn’t see her either. Though merely thinking in those terms –
that there might be someone out there
– was surprisingly unnerving.
‘There’s no one here,’ she
assured herself as she coasted north through sheets of opaque mist. Whatever
had happened to those girls, it had been way up in the fells. Anyway, the
police had already admitted they didn’t know for sure what the incident involved.
It could have been an accident.
Hazel had told Lucy she’d
be there and back in around forty minutes, but in fact so slow was her progress
that it took her over twenty to drive the three miles to Cragwood Ho. She
pulled up in the car park at the foot of the Cradle Track, and turned off her
engine. She was uncertain how she felt about seeing the police Land Rover
sitting there. On one hand, it might mean Mary-Ellen had now gone up the Track
herself to check on old Annie, which would be great news. But it could also be
that she was still on the other side of the tarn, having not yet returned in
the police launch, in which case Hazel was still here alone.
She checked her phone. It
was just past seven-twenty; evening was now turning into night. Even so, she sat
behind her steering wheel for several minutes longer, listening. The silence
was absolute, the vapour shifting past her windows in solid palls. Briefly, she
could sense the towering, rock-strewn slopes as they rose inexorably to her
left and right, eventually reaching the heights of Pavey Ark and Blea Rigg,
though all Hazel could see in the glow of her headlights was the dry-stone wall
in front of her. When she switched the lights off, even that vanished.
Several more seconds
passed, while she worked up the courage to climb out.
She hadn’t expected to be
frightened, but suddenly all that stuff about the fog hiding her as effectively
as it might hide someone else seemed like over-optimistic nonsense. Feeling as
if she was crossing some kind of Rubicon, Hazel reached into the back seat,
slid the shotgun from its case and inserted the two cartridges. Snapping the
weapon closed again, she climbed from the car, circled around, took the basket
of supplies out from the other side, and shut the door.
The thud of the central
locking system echoed in the dimness. She loitered by the vehicle as she
listened to it. A few seconds later, she tried both Mark and Mary-Ellen on
their mobile phones once more, but again there was no contact. She glanced down
across the car park to the other houses. They were only fifty or so yards away,
but the blanketing mist concealed all lights. Now that she thought about it,
Hazel wondered if she ought to be concerned about the others who lived at this
isolated end of the valley as well. Okay, they’d already been given a heads-up
by the police, though that was no guarantee Bessie Longhorn would be safe.
Hazel made a decision to call at Bessie’s cottage on the way back, and check
she was okay. Maybe take her down to the pub for couple of days as well. She
might even, if she felt particularly charitable, offer the same option to Bill
Ramsdale, though she expected she’d get short shrift on that – which would
probably be a good thing. Bessie and Annie would be hard work enough – but
wasn’t that what communities were all about?
Hazel switched her torch on
and ventured along the wall to the point where the gate and the stile were
located. On the other side, the Track snaked uphill into the gloom. It was
composed mainly of broken slate, which had deluged from the slopes above, and
slithered and cracked underfoot when anyone stepped on it. It closely followed
the edge of a barren, rock-filled ravine, and though at this lower level it was
broad enough for a narrow-gauge vehicle to pass along it, Hazel didn’t
personally know anyone who’d be crazy enough to try that in this weather.
She slid through the stile and started upward,
only now realising how challenging a hike this would be. Fifteen minutes
minimum, she reckoned, while all the while the gradient increasing. It wasn’t a
straight track, either. It bent and looped. The ravine, which, though it was
cloaked from view, lay close on her left and grew progressively deeper, its
sides ever more sheer, as she ascended, while the miasma turned steadily thicker.
She’d often assumed that, as fog was heavy, the higher up into it you climbed,
the thinner it would become. Earlier that day, she’d tried to imagine what this
fog would look like from the point of view of a chopper lofting high above the
Pikes: bare rocky islands slowly emerging from an oozing grey ocean.
Here and there on her
right, clutches of young pine grew amid the jagged piles of slate. She
occasionally glimpsed them through the torch-lit vapour, but there was nothing
cute or Christmassy about them. Many were fantastically warped and twisted by
the wind and cold. Equally unnerving, and for some reason Hazel could never
fathom, climbers and fell-walkers traversing this route in the past had chosen
particularly hefty shards of slate, some of them three or four feet in length,
and had then used smaller pieces to prop them upright on both sides of the path
– usually every hundred yards or so. What they were supposed to be –
distance-markers, or even some variety of crude outdoor art – she never knew,
but the illusion they created was of gravestones. Or, if one of the largest
ones – some were maybe as tall as five or six feet – suddenly loomed from the
fog, of malformed figures standing close by.
She ignored them as she
trudged on, the crunching impacts of her boots resounding loudly. By now she
was breathing hard, her knees and ankles aching as she leaned forward with each
step, occasionally slipping or skidding. A couple of times she thought she
heard movement – a scrape or rattle of pebbles. She would always stop on these
occasions, only to be greeted by unearthly stillness. Each time it was entirely
possible she’d heard an echo, though it set her nerves on edge. She filched her
phone from her fleece pocket to see how long she’d been here, and was dismayed
to find it was only a couple of minutes.
Sweat chilling on her body,
Hazel dragged herself up the Track, which grew ever more uneven and rugged.
Only after what seemed much longer than fifteen minutes, closer to half an hour
maybe, did it at last level out again, and diverged into two distinct routes.
The left-hand route continued ahead, still rising slowly into the Pikes, but
from this point only as the narrowest of footpaths. The right-hand route
remained broad enough for vehicle passage, just about, and led beneath the
darkly woven branches of several firs, before crossing a low bridge into the
rocky corrie where Fellstead Grange was located.
In good weather, this was a
stunningly beautiful spot. Fellstead Corrie was a natural amphitheatre in the hillside,
its gentle slopes thick with bracken, gorse and springy heather, and ascending
on all sides to high, ice-carved ridges. The farmhouse itself stood close to a
bubbling pool at the foot of a cataract, which poured from the dizzying heights
of High White Stones like a helter-skelter. At its rear there was a network of
allotments, greenhouses (mostly dingy with mould and filled with brambles),
decrepit barns and sheds which all belonged to Annie, and swathes of overgrown
pasture for which there were now no animals to graze upon. The building, which
was early eighteenth-century in origin, was large and sprawling, comprising
various wings and gables, and built from solid Lakeland stone with a roof of
Westmorland slate. Spruced up, it would be magnificent, and in a location like
this it would make a superb country house or holiday inn. But in its current
state of semi-dereliction, it was an eyesore. Both the walls and roof were
crabbed with lichen, the rotted iron gutters stuffed with mosses and bird’s nests.
But of course, none of this dilapidation was visible at present.
With the basket over her
left wrist and the shotgun cradled under her right arm, Hazel felt her way
across the rickety bridge. Fellstead Beck gurgled past underneath, having
circled around the farm from the waterfall plunge-pool. A few dozen yards to
her right somewhere, it dropped down a narrow gully into the lower valley,
eventually at some point – Hazel wasn’t sure exactly where – flowing into the
tarn.
On the other side of the
bridge, beyond a pair of moss-clad gateposts, she entered the farmyard proper,
her feet clipping on aged paving stones as she approached the darkened
structure just vaguely visible in the fog. When she halted again, the only
sound was the distant rushing of water. Meanwhile, not a single light shone
from the eerie edifice. In the icy murk, it resembled an abandoned Viking
long-hall; the remnant of some Nordic nightmare rather than a family home.
Disconcertingly, the darkness beyond its windows seemed even darker than the
darkness outside. Annie Beckwith had no electricity, no gas … but surely she
would keep a fire in her living room? Didn’t she even have candles?
Hazel checked her phone
again. It was now after seven-forty. Too early even for Annie Beckwith to go to
bed. She approached the front door. If the old lady was sleeping, Hazel didn’t
like the idea of disturbing her. But she’d not come all this way to turn back
without at least trying to make contact. She knocked several times on the
warped, scabby wood. There was no thunderous echo inside; the door was too
thick and heavy. Likewise, there was no reply.
Hazel tried again – the
same.
She fumbled for the handle,
a corroded iron ring, which, when she twisted it, turned easily. There was a
clunk as the latch was disengaged on the other side, and the door creaked open
an inch. To open it the rest of the way, she had to put her shoulder against
it, grating it inward over the stone floor.
This was also a tad
discomforting. It wasn’t common practise for folk in this part of the world to
keep their doors permanently locked, but surely a lone OAP like Annie would do
so at night, especially living all the way out here?
‘Hello!’ Hazel called into
the blackness.
Again, there was no
response.
She sidled through,
unbidden, and was hit with an eye-watering stench, the combined aromas of
grime, mildew and decay.
Hazel shone her torch
around the room, which was so cluttered with broken and dingy furniture that it
was more like a lock-up crammed with rubbish than an actual living space. Dust
furred everything, so that colours – the fabrics in the upholstery and
lampshades and the many drapes and curtains – were indiscernible, each item a
uniform grey-brown. And yet, evidence of the fine old farmhouse this had once
been was still there. The fireplace was a broad stone hearth, elaborately
carved around its edges with vines and animals, though currently filled with
cinders, burnt fragments of feathers and what looked like chicken bones. The
mantel above was a huge affair, again constructed from Lakeland stone and
heavily corniced, and yet dangling with tendrils of wax from the multiple
melted candles on top of it. A mirror was placed above the mantel, so old and
tarnished that only cloudy vagueness was reflected there. Ancient sepia photographs
hung in cracked, lopsided frames, the faces they depicted lost beneath films of
dirt. These added to the house’s melancholy air, but also created the eerie
sensation that eyes were upon her. Hazel turned sharply a couple of times,
imagining there was someone hidden in a corner whom she hadn’t previously
noticed, perhaps peering out through one of those veils of dust-web, eyes
bloodshot, yellow peg teeth fixed in a limpid, deranged grin.
‘For God’s sake, woman,
what’s the matter with you?’ she said to herself in a tight voice. Her and her
bloody imagination. ‘Annie?’ she called out. ‘Annie, it’s Hazel Carter! You
know, from The Witch’s Kettle!’
There was no answer, but
her voice echoed in various parts of the house. Immediately on her left, an
arched doorway led into a passage that Hazel thought connected with the kitchen
and dining room, but the blackness down there was so thick it was almost
tangible. She ignored it, moving into the centre of the lounge, only to freeze
at a skittering, rustling sound. She turned, just as a whip-like tail vanished
beneath the web-shrouded hulk of an age-old Welsh dresser.
Hazel had to fight down a
pang of revulsion. The place was clearly unfit for human habitation as it was,
but if it was crawling with rats as well …
A furry, grey body scuttled
along the mantle, casting a huge, amorphous shadow as she followed it with her
torch. Stubs of candles went flying to the floor, their ceramic holders
shattering. The rat leapt after them and moved in a blur of speed down the
passage towards the kitchen.
There was no question,
Hazel decided – they had to get the social services onto this. Annie would hate
them for it, but what choice did they have?
But this was assuming Annie
was still alive.
At least there was no sign
of forced entry, or that there’d been any kind of struggle in here. Not, if
Hazel was totally honest, that it would be easy to tell.
Hazel glanced at the
brown-stained ceiling, realising with a sense of deep oppression that she had
yet to check the upstairs. So unwilling that it was difficult to set her legs
in motion, she advanced across the room to a square entry in the facing wall
which led to other rooms, as well as the foot of the main stair. She approached
it and gazed up. Even
without fog, the darkness at the top was impermeable. It seemed to absorb the
glow of her torch rather than retreat from it. Hazel hesitated before placing
the basket of food on a side-table and, with shotgun levelled in one hand and
torch extended in the other, slowly ascended. The hair was stiff on her scalp.
It was actually a terrible thing she was doing here; she’d entered someone’s
home uninvited, and was now processing from one area to the next with a loaded
firearm. But she couldn’t leave. She’d called out and no one had responded, and
with the house unlocked, implying someone was at home, she knew there was some
kind of problem here. The temptation to call again was strong, but now some
basic instinct advised her that stealth was a better option.
Hazel reached the top of the staircase. The landing
was all cobwebs, bare floorboards and plaster walls, the plaster so damp and
dirty that it was falling away in chunks, revealing bone-like lathes
underneath. Various doorways opened off it. The doorway to the room that Hazel
thought Annie might use as a bedroom was at the end of a short passage on the
left. When she directed her torch in that direction, the door was partly open,
more blackness lurking on the other side. Someone could easily be waiting in
there, watching her, and she wouldn’t see them from here.
Despite this, Hazel trod slowly forward, only halting
when she was right in front of it. Even close up, the room was hidden from
view. There was insufficient space between the door and its jamb for her torch
to illuminate anything beyond. But now there was something else too – a faint
but rather fetid smell, like open drains.
Hazel knew she was going to have to say something. It
wasn’t the done thing to barge unannounced into someone’s private room,
especially with a gun, not even if you were concerned for their wellbeing.
Steeling herself in the face of an urge to hurry back downstairs and leave the
building, she spoke loudly and clearly.
‘Annie? Are you alright in there? It’s Hazel Carter …
you know, from The Witch’s Kettle down in Cragwood Keld.’
Again there was a response, but the silence was beyond
creepy. It was intense, weird; a listening silence. Despite every molecule in
her body telling her to flee this odious place, Hazel propelled herself
forward, pushing against the door, and as it swung open, entered with torch in
one hand and shotgun balanced over the top of it.
What she saw in there had her blinking with shock.
And then screeching with horror …
*
If you want to read any more,
I guess you know what you’ve got to do. DEAD MAN WALKING will be available at
all the usual outlets from first thing Thursday morning.
On the subject of the new
novel, I recently wrote a piece for BLINKBOX (the Tesco retail site, which focusses on movies and books), describing some my own experiences as a police
officer and assessing how many of them have made it into my fiction, and it’s
now appeared HERE.
BLINKBOX are currently running
a competition on their TWITTER page, with the prize a one-off proof copy of the book, in which HarperCollins will have added an extra page, allowing the winner to dedicate it to a person of his/her choice.
A very nice idea, I think - a different kind of Christmas prezzie maybe? Anyway, you've got to be in it to win it, so if you fancy having a go, the competition is still running - it only expires at 5pm on Monday November 24. But as I say, you'll need to do it via the BLINKBOX TWITTER page. Best of luck if you have a go.